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Post  Ar-jai on Wed Jun 16, 2010 11:45 pm

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Tracy had been sitting at the docs in his swim trunks for an hour, dangling his feet in the river every so often, watching some boats go down the way. He'd come out here to clear his mind, think about all the things that needed to be thought about, organize his feelings, how had he gotten into this mess? he let his head fall back so he could look up at the clouds, see if there were any answers there. he didn't find any but he kept looking anyway, a light breeze picking up a few strands of his curly blond hair that he'd let grow out over the past month.
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Post  Zenerisa on Thu Jun 17, 2010 12:53 am

Zenerisas gentle pat of her wet feet and soaked surf shorts and top bikini drenched as she had her long brown curls pulled up into a high ponytail and her long fire blue bangs dangling over her eyes as she leaned her board just by a pole and she just simply layed right in the middle of the dock like if she just simply seemed invisible. the hot toasty sun felt so good from the cold water and from all the surfing as she didn't quite care if she got a tremendous sunburn she didn't mind getting a bit crispy before a night out. Yet the thought of something happening tonight was yet so short. She had nothing to do at all..its was summer. and theres was NOTHING. for her to do.
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Post  Ar-jai on Thu Jun 17, 2010 1:11 am

Tracy looked up to see if the noise was coming from the Person who'd been the reason for his coming to the docks, the source of all his problems. even though he knew the chances of her coming to find him where slim, a wave of disappointment swelled over him when he saw that it wasn't her. he flopped down on the dock, his already burnt shoulders and back immediately protesting, he let out a wheeze of pain, but did not move. he felt like drifting down the river on his back, just letting the water carry him someplace else, but he couldn't, he had no way back.
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Post  Zenerisa on Thu Jun 17, 2010 1:16 am

Zenerisa then noticed a boy, just around the same age as her. she blinked and grew curious to know what random dude would just be sitting along side by a dock. She then grabbed onto her surf board and quietly walked towards him and simply loomed over him with quite a blank face. and she then suddenly spoke out abruptly "Your crazy to be sitting out here in the sun like this..." she cocked a smirk as she placed on of her hands on her waist as she stared down at the boy before her. The burns on his back and shoulders seemed pretty bad as she took out sunscreen from her bag and she simply placed it beside him.
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Post  Ar-jai on Thu Jun 17, 2010 1:22 am

His eyes flicked open as the girl's shadow fell on him. He continued to stare at her as she spoke, ignoring the sunscreen "maybe it's my nature to be crazy" he retorted, refraining from a shrug, knowing it would hurt.he looked at the bottle she'd offered him then looking back up at her "that only burns worse if you're already burnt. it keeps the heat in and makes it take longer to heal." he commented
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Post  Zenerisa on Thu Jun 17, 2010 1:28 am

Zenerisa smirked still as she layed her board against a pole nearby and placed both of her hands on her hips. "Oh really? like your crazy enough to take on 20 feet waves?..I don't think so...and plus this is different sun screen it actually saves you trust me. " she smiled and urged him to use the sunscreen as it was surely a guarantee he wont have his sun burn as bad as he had it now. Zenerisa then sat by the edge and stared out at the ocean "So..why are you just sitting here looking like an idiot?" it was obvious she dint mean the idiot part as she was simply joking with the sarcasm she was using. Her sea green eyes just simply stared back at him in curiosity.
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Post  Ar-jai on Thu Jun 17, 2010 1:36 am

He sighed, going back to ignoring the Sunscreen. "no, I'm not a surfer. and I'm thinking, thanks" he added the last part on after some thought, he almost spilled out the whole last week of his life, how his girlfriend had started talking to his best friend, and his best friend had a crush on her, and his friend had tried, and succeeded, to pull the two apart so he could get the girl, and how Tracy desperately wanted her back but his friend's lies where so complex they were hard NOT to believe. He didn't want to talk about all that drama...Not with someone he'd just met...
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Post  Zenerisa on Thu Jun 17, 2010 1:41 am

Zenerisa eye'd his expression. Immediately she understood the problem and chuckled a bit to herself. "Girlfriend issues?.." she slightly mentioned as she eye'd him from the corner of her eyes. she then reached into her bag for a waxing bar and took her board as she simply began to wax the top as she swung her feet around on the edge. She remembered her moments of just simply sitting somewhere from thinking way too much about boys...as it then led on with a boy asking what was wrong with her..and her falling in love..and soon him leaving her last minute. surely she more likely understood the way he was feeling.
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Post  Ar-jai on Thu Jun 17, 2010 1:47 am

"yeah..." he replied with a 'well what can y'do' tone before sitting up and turning to her to watch her work silently, studying the board, wondering what was so fun about swimming into to ocean, getting on a piece of wood and going up a wave, falling off and swimming back to shore just to do it again...
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Post  Zenerisa on Thu Jun 17, 2010 1:52 am

Zenerisa noticed him watching as she then slightly felt a little nervous as he watched her and she then slightly spoke in light voice "Wanna try it out?..I can teach you for free." she tried to smile but she was getting beyond nervous as she always did whenever a silent moment like that just seemed to happened.. after a silent moment..she just couldn't help but smile by the feeling of the adrenaline kicking in her veins and the speed of just going straight through a tunnel of a wave..
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Post  Ar-jai on Thu Jun 17, 2010 1:58 am

he studdered a bit, tripping on his words, he honestly couldn't swim well, and didn't want to be on a BOARD out in the middle of the ocean, "n-no" he chuckled a bit "i--it would be a waist of time..." he explained to her softly " i don't learn anything like that fast, you'll get frustrated" this was true, a lot of the people who'd tried to teach him things had simply given up.
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Post  Zenerisa on Thu Jun 17, 2010 9:15 am

Zenerisa then simply stared at him with beyond serious and caring eyes. She then took his arm and pulled him up "Cmon, I don't get frustrated. Thats why you have fun when you learn...and I can make sure you wont get hurt in any sense of way on this board." she smiled then assuringly pulling the boy along down the docks and heading towards the water. she then wondered why he seemed so tensed up by the fact of going swimming.
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Post  Ar-jai on Thu Jun 17, 2010 11:30 am

He protested lightly with a few "no-no it's fine you don't have to..."s but not fighting her grip, just walking slower than her, hoping that if she was gonna get him out that far in the water she'd stay with him so he didn't drown. His mother had told him time and time again just to stay calm in the water if you freak out you're going to drown, but he couldn't ever calm down once he got that first bit of water in his throat. It burned and always terrified him, he also didn't like looking around and seeing nothing, not knowing where the sides ended, or where the bottom was.
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Post  Zenerisa on Thu Jun 17, 2010 7:26 pm

Zenerisa's pull was beyond strong though as she began to pull him along into the water...."I Promise nothing will happen if anything Im sure I'LL be the one to get hurt." she smiled towards him and she pulled him along as the water began going along up to there waist.
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Post  Ar-jai on Thu Jun 17, 2010 7:36 pm

he went along more passively now, not resisting anymore, simply following, eying the water accusingly, wondering what was going on back at his house. maybe this would get his mind off it... he decided then to jump into it, he would give it his all, he would try his hardest and he would surf by the end of the day if it killed him.
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Post  Zenerisa on Thu Jun 17, 2010 7:48 pm

Zenerisa smiled happily as they then finally reached water that reached his neck and well zen of course was swimming from how short she was as she then still held onto his arm just in case. she then spoke in a calm voice "OK then! you did awesome! now time to get on my board! " she smiled happily and patted her board on the top as she pulled her board a bit down so he can slide the board through his legs and easily sit on it "Now just slide under it and you'll plop up the water on top of it!" she spoke assuringly as she still held her board down
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Post  Ar-jai on Thu Jun 17, 2010 7:53 pm

...last sentence...did NOT make sense XD
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Post  Zenerisa on Thu Jun 17, 2010 7:58 pm

Ar-jai wrote:...last sentence...did NOT make sense XD
oh um and for the last sentence its like shes holding the board down so he can climb on XD
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Post  Ar-jai on Thu Jun 17, 2010 8:05 pm

He climbs on as steadily as possible, trying to stay on top, only barely succeeding, he then saw the empty look of the water below, he couldnt' see the bottom, he could only think of how hungry it looked at his limbs started shaking at his thoughts of drowning and he fell back into the water, flipping the board
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Post  Zenerisa on Thu Jun 17, 2010 8:19 pm

"Woah!.." she quickly helped him up as she patted his back just in case he swallowed some water as she smiled "You were doing great hun! don't be scared, you gotta make the water be scared of you!" she said with great confidence as she flipped her board back to the right side and held it down a bit for him to climb back on "Don't be afraid..." she smiled assuringly.
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Post  Ar-jai on Thu Jun 17, 2010 8:29 pm

He did couch up a bit of water and floated in the water for a minute, working to erase the frightened look from his face before climbing back on and trying to look out to sea, seeing no end it scared him even more, so he looked at the board, a solid, semi-stable surface. it had ends, and it had a bottom. he trusted it."now what?" he asked, calmer
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Post  Zenerisa on Thu Jun 17, 2010 8:43 pm

Zenerisa smiled as she then climbed up right infront of him and you noticed she slightly began to paddle out and quite quick "You start paddling " she smirked as she looked back at him, the board was actually quite long enough for two people. You then felt the board start gliding up small waves and she then noticed the waves grow on bigger as she then stopped as they were quite faar from shore "Now listen. you need to trust me in this part ok?...I promise you It wont be you getting hurt. Only me. Got it?" She smiled assuringly.
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Post  Ar-jai on Thu Jun 17, 2010 8:58 pm

Doubt kicked in then, why was she talking about getting hurt?he looked back down at the water with distrust. what was it planning? was she really gonna get hurt... if she did it would be his fault. he didn't want to do this anymore, he looked back to shore and his eyes nearly popped out of their sockets "why are we so far out?!" he asked immediately, starting to paddle back towards shore, knowing he wouldn't be able to swim that far
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Post  Zenerisa on Thu Jun 17, 2010 9:08 pm

"This is the only way towards the waves though..." she looked back at him a bit innocently just staring at him as she then grabbed his arm and stopped his paddling. "look!...relax. you can trust me.." she smiled as she faced herself towards him. "nothing is going to happen. take risks. or not your going to regret it when your older that you did not do it..." she smirked a bit and leaned a bit back as they drifted over waves.
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Post  Ar-jai on Thu Jun 17, 2010 9:19 pm

he looked back at her, expression shocked and half accusing "what if i'm not ready to take a risk?! huh? what am i even doing out here with you i JUST met you back there!" he waved an arm in the general direction of the dock. "this is crazy!"
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